ScriptDock guideline
for a helpful review
Please note the authors indication of the state of the project. It may be ill suited to begin with a detailed spelling or formatting critique, if it’s actually a first draft and the author is looking for a general feedback.
- Note your spontaneous emotional reaction. How did the text affect you as you read it? Without speculating on the reasons why, just share: This is how I felt.
- Address the fundamental elements of the story: How clearly is the central conflict portrayed in the WORLD, TONE, and CHARACTERS (inner conflicts and conflicts between the characters)?
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Highlight passages where questions arise, and specify exactly which line gave you which impression. Also note which parts you particularly liked!
- Adress the tone and writing style. Does the style support the emotional effect? Where does a special magic unfold, and where does it fall short?
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Make suggestions on how things could be improved. If you have ideas, feel free to contribute them: Suggestions often highlight which elements are weak or could be slightly different.
- What are the positives? It’s always worth bringing out the potential of a story! Mention what fascinates you most about the material or what you like about it.
- If there are other films that have already attempted something similar (whether they were a hit or a flop), briefly point them out. Market knowledge is not a disadvantage.
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Point in a direction. End your review with a brief summary and feel free to offer a recommendation for the next steps. It can help the author plan their next moves.